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Review: The Unyielding Heart by Clara Montford (2026)

Posted May 21, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

This seems to be the debut Regency by this author, and it’s a striking piece of work, with an intensity that few books of this genre can match. There were some oddities, but on the whole it’s a brilliant piece of work.

Here’s the premise: Juliana Lockwood has agreed to marry her cousin, Oliver Fairchild. It’s not a love match on either side, merely a practical solution to her father’s growing debts, and Oliver has his own reasons for his reluctance, but the settlements are agreed, and the engagement is on. At this point, a neighbour, Sebastian Blackwood, returns to the district after five years away, and he and Juliana are immediately drawn to each other, both physically and intellectually.

This sets the scene for the fundamental premise of the book, whether Juliana follows her heart or does her duty by her family, and settles for the pragmatic marriage. This is a dilemma that must have arisen with great regularity in Regency times, and the safe marriage to the known quantity was a common solution to the problem of finding marriage partners for all the children when the family was buried in the countryside with only a limited number of families of equal rank to choose from. The wealthy and aristocratic went to London to find husbands, but country families had few options.

To be honest, I never quite understood why Juliana viewed the marriage in such a negative light. Oliver was a friend for whom she must have felt some affection, if only through the shared experiences of childhood. She knew his character and had nothing to fear from it. Oliver’s secret (which isn’t much of a secret, since it’s revealed very early) didn’t preclude having a happy, or at least contented, marriage, and for Juliana (and all Regency women) there were advantages in marriage that had nothing to do with the chosen husband. Independence, for one thing, and the ability to escape from the constant control of the family. But we see none of this – it’s all about how the marriage would stifle her (or ‘bury her alive’, as the blurb has it).

Sebastian Blackwood enters this situation with all the subtlety of a hand grenade. He starts by having a long, intense conversation with Juliana at their very first meeting, laden with subtext. He deduces her situation right away (and this is a constant refrain, that everybody understands everything; every meaningful look is interpreted in depth by observers, so there are absolutely no secrets). The intensity is another recurring theme, with every dialogue redolent with meaning. Anyone looking for the traditional Regency restraint had better move swiftly on, because there’s none on display here.

While we’re on the subject of Regency expectations, there are a number of minor irritations. Some are the usual thing: dance cards, the modern waltz, passed instead of died, service a la russe, the big wedding (invitations, lace veils, table decorations and all), a dedicated ballroom in a private house (vanishingly rare; a medieval house would use either the great hall or the long gallery, and a modern building would have several smaller rooms that opened into one larger room).

There were some strange breaches of etiquette, like general conversation around the table at a formal dinner, and the new neighbour who calls on the neighbours instead of waiting for them to call on him. Surely everyone who’s read Pride & Prejudice knows that the protocol was for Mr Bennet to call on Mr Bingley, not the other way round? Then there was the howler of shooting pheasant in July, a huge no-no (autumn and winter only).

One aspect that I found really unsettling (although I’m sure it wouldn’t bother most people) is characters being called by their Christian names. Not in dialogue, which was always strictly formal and very correct, but in the narrative. Juliana’s father was called Augustus several times, and her Aunt Charlotte was regularly called just Charlotte. I’m used to the point of view setting the names, so when we’re in Juliana’s point of view, I’d expect it to be Mr Lockwood said… or Aunt Charlotte said… As it was, it was very odd.

One other unsettling aspect was not knowing quite where the story was set. Juliana’s house is described as being very close to open moorland, but there isn’t that much proper moorland in England and most of it is in the northern counties (but we’re told it’s not in the north). I can only assume it’s down in Devon or Cornwall, but there’s no other indication, apart from the moors. Does it matter? No, not at all, but it does feel odd, much the same, I imagine, as an American reader not knowing whether a book is set in Louisiana or Idaho. Even if it’s not plot-related, one likes to know where one is. Every Jane Austin book is set in a specific county.

But these points are relatively trivial, because the strengths of the book far overshadow my minor grumbles. The author’s glorious powers of description, for instance. She has an amazing ability to evoke a setting in wonderfully atmospheric terms, and the weather plays a big role, too, with storms and rain abounding. I suspect the author is a fan of the Kiera Knightly P&P, since the hero spends a number of important scenes dripping wet.

Then there’s the intensity that I mentioned earlier. This gives the whole story a power that most Regencies entirely lack. Let’s face it, the conflict between marrying for duty or love is as old as the genre itself, but here it’s given an unusual resonance. There are some moments (OK, a lot of moments) where the intensity spills over into un-Regency-like openness, and on a number of occasions things are said openly that I would have expected to be expressed privately or at least more subtly. But every author creates her own version of the Regency, and this one has a lot less restraint than the norm.

There’s only one point where the lack of restraint is just too implausible and that’s the climactic dinner party, where things were said and done in the presence of all the neighbourhood worthies and the servants! No, just no. And no, marriage settlements were not signed at the dinner table, or by the bride – that was men’s work, and in private. But I confess, it makes for a very dramatic moment, which is presumably just as the author intended, so I won’t knock off a point for it.

A very unusual and powerfully compelling read, that I just couldn’t put down. I’ll be watching out for more of this author’s work. Five stars.

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Review: Petteril’s Party by Mary Lancaster (2026)

Posted May 21, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

This is book 9 in the series, and although the initial freshness has worn off and the disparity between April’s background and Piers’ rank is of less importance now, the author still manages to come up with an entertaining and intriguing mystery.

Here’s the premise: April and Piers have arranged a get-together for all Piers’ old friends from his days as an academic, before he inherited a viscountcy and was forced to give it all up. They’ve rented a house for a couple of weeks, but the owners have taken most of the servants to London with them, there are weird noises in the night and odd things disappear. Then there’s the sole remaining manservant, who’s insolent and lazy. And then there’s the lady who has some history with Piers, so that April is torn by jealousy. And then there’s an attempted murder…

From then on, the plot rumbles on almost under its own steam. The intrepid duo investigate the attack on the footman, while the lesser mysteries are rather easily resolved. For Piers, there’s the question of whether his academic friends could possibly be involved in bopping the footman over the head, and his loyalty to his friends is counterbalanced by April’s clearer vision of these people she’s only just met. For April, there’s the huge gulf between her own background and Piers’ highly educated upper-class friends. And the friends have their own uncertainties and insecurities.

It all comes to a satisfactory conclusion, naturally, although (as usual) I didn’t guess the identity of the villain. One line near the end shocked me, though – apparently only a little over a year has passed since Piers and April first met. Considering just how many murders and other mysteries have been squeezed into that time (including a trip to Portugal), and how much April has been required to change, from street urchin and thief to gracious viscountess, my suspension of disbelief is hanging by a thread. But the series is so entertaining, I’m happy to pretend it’s plausible. Five stars (again).

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Review: Frances sets the Fashion by Christina Dudley (2026)

Posted May 21, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Christina Dudley is such a clever author! This seemingly simple plot (let’s put on a play!) produced a tale of delicious complexity, and every part of it perfectly sensible.

Here’s the premise: Frances Barstow has grown up as a dependant of benevolent Lord Dere. Unlike her older siblings, however, she hasn’t pushed back against the hostility of Lord Dere’s niece-in-law, Mrs Markham Dere. In fact, she has gone out of her way to keep Mrs Dere contented, and now that Frances if of marriageable age, she is set to reap the reward. Mrs Dere and a friend with a daughter of similar age arrange a party, to which three eligible young men will be invited, and Frances will be expected to make a push to secure one of them for herself. And yes, Mrs Dere will do the choosing. Since Frances has no particular wish to marry yet, she’s thrust into a difficult situation – can she avoid being edged into a marriage against her will but still keep her sponsor happy?

The three young men have their own problems. One of them, Mr Midgecomb (or Midge) is in love with the friend’s daughter, Jane Eveleigh, but being of only ordinary appearance, he is always outshone by the extremely beautiful (not to mention charming and witty) Adam Hearne. To boost his own chances, he persuades Adam to pretend to be simple-minded. Adam, a consummate actor, isn’t averse, especially as he has no wish to marry himself. But when the invitation to the house party arrives, he finds he’s committed to his dumb act for several weeks – quite a challenge! But still, with so many people around them, they’ll be able to do some real acting, won’t they, and put on a performance of A Midsummer Night’s Dream?

There’s a lot going on here, with the swirling machinations of the two matchmakers, the waxing and waning friendship of the two young ladies as they compete (seriously or otherwise) for the attentions of the men, and the manoeuvrings of the men themselves. And all of it wrapped up in the preparations for the performance of the play, with readings, rehearsals, costume preparations and the like. Frances is hard-pressed to avoid entanglements without falling out with either her friend or her benefactress. And all the time, Frances and Adam are ever-so-slowly falling in love, even featuring an impulsive but still in character proposal, only held back by his assumed stupidity and the promises they’ve made to other people, intended to be helpful but now thrusting them deeper into deceit.

The whole situation blows up when Adam’s family history turns up to haunt him and everything goes pear-shaped. So many Regencies depend on manufactured tension to throw a spanner in the works, or even worse, the Great Misunderstanding, but the falling out here is real and serious. Offending Mrs Markham Dere, when the Barstows are entirely dependent on the goodwill of Lord Dere for the very roof over their heads is not something to be done lightly, and the whole village is dragged into the dispute.

It takes some time to disentangle all the pretence (and the reasons for it), but everything comes to a rousing conclusion in the end. I do have a small grumble, a personal reaction to Adam’s return and his final proposal. As written, there’s some edgy sparring between Frances and Adam, showing that she has not entirely forgiven his deception. He then sets about a thoroughly convoluted and teasing proposal, completely misleading her on some important points. Now, I can see that perhaps it was intended to demonstrate clever Adam as opposed to his falsely stupid persona, but to my mind it was both cruel to Frances, to keep her in suspense, and also dishonest. In my opinion, what was needed after all the deception was a totally honest (and humble) proposal, with a suitable amount of grovelling. All the clever stuff just made him seem arrogant, to my mind. But that’s a personal view, and perhaps I’m alone in that reaction.

Still, the matter was settled quickly enough once he stopped teasing her, and all ended satisfactorily. An excellent five stars (as usual).

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Review: Fernwood by M Culler (2024)

Posted May 8, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Not my usual fare, this is a mid-Victorian romance with a complicated false identity that actually worked surprisingly well. No great depth to it, but an enjoyable read.

Here’s the premise: Eliza Southwell is an aspiring actress who’s had no luck in her native Boston finding stage work, so she takes a job as companion and maid to a wealthy widow travelling to England. Surely she’ll find work there? All she has to do is see her new mistress safely to her late husband’s estate – how hard can it be? But when the widow dies unexpectedly while at sea, and the crew mistakenly assume Eliza is the rich widow… what’s a girl to do? And when she sees Fernwood and meets her supposed sister-in-law, she’s not sure she ever wants to leave.

There just one small fly in the ointment – her supposed dead husband isn’t dead at all, and when he turns up alive and well and clearly able to identify his supposed wife as an impostor, the fat is well and truly in the fire.

This is a short book and a romance, so nothing happens that the reader can’t easily predict. The husband agrees to go along with the subterfuge, the two gradually fall in love and a way is found to set everything on a proper legal footing without creating a huge scandal. The villain isn’t really much of a villain, and is easily dealt with, so there isn’t much of an obstacle to the happy ever after.

This kind of premise only works if it’s believable, and in this case, both the wife’s demise and the actress who takes her place, and the husband being mistakenly thought to be dead are completely credible. The other difficult point is when the husband finds out his wife is strangely different from how he remembered her, and this is perhaps less believable, but by this point I was invested in both the principals, so I could go with the flow.

I have some minor grumbles. Firstly, the use of ‘passed’ instead of ‘died’, which was a huge irritant in the early chapters. I told myself repeatedly that Eliza was American, so maybe she would say that, but it still grated. The other major irritant was the use of dual first person narrative, which made it difficult to know whose was the point of view. I know it’s trendy now, but it’s really hard to read, so please, authors, don’t do this. These points were especially irritating as the book was otherwise very well written.

Other than that, I had no quibble with the story. I would have liked it to be a bit longer to give the characters somewhat more nuanced behaviours. As it was, the principals were all too good to be true, but it’s not a big deal. An enjoyable read. Four stars.

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Review: The Babe and the Baron by Carola Dunn (1997)

Posted May 8, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

A fairly light read, with little external drama, just a nice couple brought together by circumstances slowly falling in love, surrounded by a lovely extended family. Gentle and undemanding, although the ‘babe’ of the title is a real baby, who comes accompanied by some fairly detailed descriptions of pregnancy, childbirth and afterwards.

Here’s the premise: Laura Chamberlain’s feckless husband has left her a young widow, and pregnant. She looks forward to an impoverished future but unexpectedly a cousin of her late husband arrives to whisk her away to his estate in Shropshire. Being a dutiful head of the family, Lord Wyckham (Gareth) feels a responsibility for her, and she, bemused but willing to be looked after for a while, agrees to it.

At Llys Manor, she revels in the luxury she finds there, and also the aforementioned family — Gareth’s four younger brothers, his aunt, an eccentric uncle and another widow, the flighty Maria with three children. At first, it all seems a bit overwhelming, but she gradually begins to find her feet, helping the aunt run the household, and persuading Maria to permit her badly-behaved children a tutor and some ponies. And (since this is a romance) she soon comes to think of Gareth as more than an avuncular cousin.

There’s just one problem — Gareth turns out to be obsessively cautious with pregnant women, and Laura has to assert her independence quite strongly to prevent him wrapping her in cotton wool until her confinement. The reason for this is gradually revealed during the course of the book. The other interesting history is Laura’s herself, and this, too, is slowly brought to light, although the supposed scandal never seems to upset anyone.

In fact, this is one of the weaknesses of the book, that the Wyckham family, and especially Gareth himself, are just too good to be true. Apart from his over-protectiveness towards Laura, he is, frankly, the perfect brother, nephew and lord of the manor. And of course, like all perfect heroes, he makes a complete hash of the proposal. But then it makes him a good match for Laura, for she’s Miss Perfect herself.

This book dates from 1997, and there are a number of elements which wouldn’t find their way into a modern Regency. The Scottish doctor’s very strongly rendered brogue, and the Welsh servants way of talking are a bit much. Having mucked up his first proposal, Gareth corrects the situation by sweeping Laura into his manly arms for a passionate kiss, a process I strongly disapproved of. Humble proposal first, passionate kiss when she says yes. And finally, Gareth has some history with mistresses, which was absolutely the norm in the Georgette Heyer era, but not so much nowadays.

But these minor grumbles aside, I swept through the book in a matter of hours, and thoroughly enjoyed the authentic Regency feel, the (almost) perfect Regency-appropriate language and actions, and the gentle romance. It doesn’t quite reach the heights of five stars, but it’s a very good four stars.

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Review: A Gentleman Unknown by Robyn Mearsley (2025)

Posted May 8, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Robyn Mearsley is a new-to-me author, and this appears to be her debut book. As such (and in common with most debuts), it’s slightly lumpy in parts, but it makes for an enjoyable read, a little bit out of the common way.

Here’s the premise: Much Becksleigh is a quiet English backwater, but plans are afoot to build a canal through it, thus connecting it to the outside world and turning it into a bustling town. William Pearce, the ‘gentleman unknown’ of the title, has been sent by his wealthy father to secure all the contracts required to build the canal with the various townsfolk. To him, it seems like a straightforward task. To the young ladies of the town, he is a person of intense interest, and Eleanor, Priscilla and Ruth can’t help wondering what he will be like and building dreams around him.

The plot revolves around both of these elements. William discovers that the townsfolk are a thoroughly difficult bunch to do business with, changing their minds and refusing to help for what seems to him (and to the reader!) to be the most capricious of reasons. And the three young ladies find out that dreams don’t necessarily turn out to be true (but sometimes they do).

Towards the end, there are some dramatic happenings which change everything. Naturally, it all comes right in the end, the hero gets both his canal and the girl, but this merely underscores my principle grumble about the book. For the canal, there are obstacles aplenty, with a new hitch in almost every chapter. For the romance, there is absolutely no friction. They meet, they like each other, relations conspire to throw them together at every opportunity, they decide to get married. Not a single obstacle to slow things down. There’s no kiss, either, and not even a proper declaration of love or proposal. That’s very much in keeping with some of the earlier Regencies, of course, but I was a little disappointed.

I mentioned that the book was lumpy in parts, so I do have a few grumbles. It’s clear that the author has done oodles of research into canals and many other things besides, and a great deal of it found its way into the book. In addition, there’s quite a lot of unnecessary dialogue. Readers don’t need to know every last word of greetings and discussion about the weather, for instance. I struggled a bit with complicated descriptions of family relationships and scenery, although I managed fine without understanding it all. There was some repetition, especially covering an incident that had happened to Eleanor, which was described in full twice, almost word for word the same. And the punctuation was haywire sometimes, with lots of questions missing their question mark.

These are all fairly trivial, however, and didn’t spoil my enjoyment at all. I particularly liked the array of strong characters. William and Eleanor were fairly bland, but the firebrand clergyman and his fanatical daughter were fascinating, and I liked the eccentric Mr Dalton, and Tom with his all-or-nothing style of curricle driving (although I’m still hazy about who precisely Tom was in that tsunami of relations). There was plenty of humour in the book, too. I would have liked just a shade more passion from the principals, but otherwise an unusual and enjoyable read. Four stars.

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Review: The Imagined Attachment by Holli Jo Monroe (2022)

Posted May 7, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

This is a pleasant read, where nothing the least bit unpredictable shakes the plot from well-worn rails, but it’s none the worse for that. I liked daydreaming Elaine (incongruously named for a tragic heroine) and sober Sir Phillip, and if I could have done with less of their internal monologues, that’s just me.

Here’s the premise: Miss Elaine Brooke returns from school in Bath to join her widowed mother in genteel poverty. They live in the shadow of the local ‘big house’, where Elaine’s childhood friend, Daniel Ashburn, has morphed over time into her ideal man, and the hero of many of her fanciful daydreams. Meeting him again and being exposed once more to his careless charm sets her halfway to serious love. But Daniel’s older brother, the weighed-down-by-responsibility Sir Phillip, is determined to see Daniel settle down with heiress Miss Talbot. He’s been courting her all spring in London, but never got to the point of a proposal. Now Sir Phillip is hosting the Talbots and others in a house party to finally bring Daniel up to scratch. Elaine is the big problem here, not only distracting Daniel from doing his duty, but also becoming a distraction to Sir Phillip, too.

And that is basically the whole plot, which unfolds exactly as you’d expect, with the principals starting by cordially disliking each other and gradually inching, in a two steps forward and one back sort of way, towards an understanding of their hearts, or at least a straightening out of the multitude of misunderstandings along the way. There’s a huge amount of internal musing of the does she/doesn’t she and will he/won’t he variety, which I found became tedious after a while. I much prefer a romantic couple who know their own minds from the start, but I freely admit that the author builds their journey from enemies to lovers very skilfully. The encounters between Sir Phillip and Elaine are beautifully written. It’s only the internal wavering that I disliked, so much so that I was skipping forward at the end to get to the denouement.

A well-written tale with likeable and very relatable principals, which could have done with a bit more bite in the plot. Four stars.

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Review: Redeemed by Jenny Hambly (2026)

Posted May 7, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Another excellent read from Jenny Hambly, one of the most reliable of modern Regency authors. This series is based on a clever idea – that a kindly and benevolent lady sets up a secret hiding place for women of the gentry or aristocracy who’ve fallen into difficulties of one sort or another, and need a quiet place to recover. This automatically lays the foundations for the heroine’s rise from trouble to reach her happy ever after.

Here’s the premise: Susannah Croft has struggled for years to raise her illegitimate daughter, but a spell at Ashwick Hall and a fortunate legacy give her the chance to rebuild her life. Thomas Townsend, a neighbour in her new neighbourhood, is a serious man who’s devoted his life to looking after his younger brother. Both have failed romantic entanglements in their past which (naturally) come back to haunt them.

The plot of this one runs on rails. It’s a lovely, gentle story where nothing terribly dramatic or unexpected happens, but the blossoming romance is beautifully drawn. Both hero and heroine have to learn to trust again.

I’ll confess I found this one a touch bland. Susannah (Sukey) is offered nothing but kindness from her new neighbours, which, considering her history, I found a bit of a stretch. She would at the least have been a controversial figure, living as she was alone with an illegitimate daughter and no husband in sight. Even though that wasn’t her fault, she was still ruined in society’s eyes, and although some would have been sympathetic, I would have expected a lot more pushback from some people. That would have given the book a bit more ‘bite’, I think.

As it was, all the conflict came from the past romances of the two protagonists, which worked pretty well, although there seemed to be a surprising amount of coincidence going on. But maybe that was just me.

Overall, a lovely, gentle read, not too surprising but none the worse for that. Four stars.

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Review: Mr Collins in Love by Lee Welch (2025)

Posted May 7, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

This is a really odd little book. I love the idea of Mr Collins being gay, and I can only admire the ingenious way the author weaves this idea into the actual events of Pride and Prejudice. It’s just a pity that it doesn’t work terribly well.

Here’s the premise: the setting is the year of Mr Collins’ ordination at Easter and his acquisition of the living of Hunsford by the patronage of Lady Catherine de Burgh. Mr Collins is finding it all a bit stressful, and here’s where the author’s talent shines through. Our hero is portrayed on the outside as the bumbling clergyman of the book, with his carefully contrived compliments to the ladies, but since we see his inner thoughts, we see all his uncertainty. He agonises over every move – is it the right, the proper thing to do? How will it look to his servants, his parishioners, his patroness? What do they expect of him? There’s some conflict here between his inner timidity and the unstoppable arrogance he displays in P&P, but never mind.

But then something even more unsettling than Lady Catherine appears – a friend from Mr C’s youth, a labourer called Jem, on the run from the naval career he hated. Mr C gives him a job, they settle back into their former friendship and it soon becomes clear that there’s a sexual element to it. Not that they ever so much as touch each other, but there are some private moments involving naked bathing in a well-hidden pool, and it is a bit graphic so avoid if you want a completely clean read.

And then there’s the pressure from Lady C for Mr C to marry, and he has an extraordinary conversation with Jem about it. Jem fully understands that a wife would change everything, but Mr C doesn’t seem to realise quite what he means. It’s never clear whether he appreciates the requirements of marriage, or whether he’s so unworldly that he doesn’t really get it. I think the author was aiming for subtlety here, but as far as I’m concerned it was all a bit too subtle, and I’d have liked a more explicit explanation of just what he thinks marriage entails.

The next moment we’ve jumped to Longbourn, post-proposal to Lizzie, with Mr C working out how he’s going to explain her refusal to Lady C, and how long a respite this might earn him before he has to go courting again. Whereupon Charlotte Lucas begins her campaign to get him to propose to her instead. This takes some doing, and here is where his arrogance carried him along in the original. But the author having painted Mr C as a man who simply fails to understand subtext, he doesn’t get it when Charlotte says casually that she’d quite like to be married. He doesn’t take the hint, and she practically has to propose to him herself to get him to the point.

I know that Charlotte is a practical sort of girl, but this portrayal of her I found impossible to believe. In particular, her crawling declaration that she’ll do anything he wants if only he’ll marry her (only slightly paraphrasing) throws every shred of dignity out of the window. As for telling him that they could live like brother and sister – why would she even consider the possibility? That is the purpose of marriage in Regency times. She can’t possibly have any inkling of his feelings for Jem, because I doubt any well brought up lady would know that was even a possibility. So this part of the book didn’t work at all for me, and what is more, it serves to sweep away the last vestige of tension.

Mr C returns triumphant to Hunsford, Jem is pleased, Charlotte gains the respectable establishment she wants and they all lived happily ever after… or did they? No indication of that. There are so many potential problems that it seems like cheating to end at that point. Did Jem and Mr C ever go further? Did they ever talk about love? Did anyone ever find out? How did Charlotte cope with her rather lonely existence? And (the most worrying element, to my mind) how did Lady C react to the non-appearance of children? Undoubtedly she would haul Charlotte off to a physician who would reveal the awful truth and then Mr C would be in trouble.

To be honest, this story would have been more interesting, I think, if it had started after Mr C and Charlotte were married and then Jem arrived. That would have developed some proper tension. As it is, I did enjoy the book, up to a point, but I can only give it three stars.
PS An unexpected side effect of this book is that Amazon is now recommending swathes of gay romance books to me.

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An Independent Woman by Sophia Holloway (2025)

Posted January 27, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

I’ve enjoyed previous Sophia Holloway books, but this one was just too dull for words. Both hero and heroine were too unbelievably good, without a single flaw between them, the villain was over the top and there was an adorable moppet of a child who rendered everyone around her saccharine sweet. And nothing very interesting happened.

Here’s the premise: Louisa, Lady Dembleby is relieved to find herself widowed and unexpectedly free from a marriage which she’d hated. Having failed to produce the expected heir, she takes her small daughter and returns to live with her parents, an odd choice for a widow, but never mind. Her parents seem to think they have some hold over her, but they really don’t. She’s independent, and can do what she likes, if she has the money.

That’s another odd aspect of the situation. Louisa apparently gets one third of her husband’s estate after his death by law, which is true, up to a point. If a man leaves no will, or fails to mention his wife in his will, that is indeed what she gets. But by the Regency, it was almost universal for wealthy men to agree to a settlement for the wife before marriage, which could be for a lot less that a third of the estate. In this case, there is already a dowager, and if she also got a third of the estate, that would leave only one third for the new inheritor of the estate. And if he died and left a widow to take another third of the estate… well, silly situation, but you get the point.

Anyway, it all becomes moot because Louisa fortuitously inherits an estate which she moves to and updates to make a cosy home in the country with her daughter, and then, for some reason I’ve forgotten, she moves to Bath. She’s determined not to marry again, but then she meets Major Benfield Barkby, who was wounded in the hostilities in Spain. Many people are turned off by his maimed hand, but not Louisa (whose only fault seems to be that she’s too perfect), and he, of course, suffering from a similar fault, is a big success with the cute child.

When the child suffers a serious infection, the two principals hurl themselves with unstinting devotion into nursing her back to health, a section of the book which went on far too long for my liking. And then there’s a villain, some foul rumours, a completely irrational decision by Louisa and (a tediously long time later) a happy ending.

There’s too much head-hopping for my taste, where the point of view character switches mid-scene, and sometimes even mid paragraph. That can be effective, but I just found it distracting. Don’t get me wrong, this is a well-written book and if you’re in the mood for two holier-than-thou characters, a sickly sweet child and an over-the-top villain, go for it. For myself, I like my characters a touch more real-world than this. There were plotting issues that niggled away at me, too, like the money issue. I could accept the third of the estate business or the unexpected inheritance, but both seemed too much. And why move Louisa to the inherited house and then to Bath? Why not go directly to Bath? All in all, these issues keep it to three stars for me.

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