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Review: Simply Perfect by Mary Balogh (2008)

Posted October 14, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

The fourth and final book of the series, and the formula is becoming wearisome: a wildly handsome aristocratic hero, a spiky heroine with a complicated history who dislikes him on sight because reasons, the discovery that that they have the hots for each other, developing slowly into love, but there are some kind of obstacles, necessitating a lot of toing and froing and general angst. There are minor variations but that’s the gist of it. Which is OK but I like a bit more variation in my characters, to be honest. Picky? Yes, absolutely.

Here’s the premise: Claudia Martin is the headmistress of her own school in Bath, proud of her achievements and not in need of a man to help her through life, thank you very much. She needs to take two of her graduating pupils to London to take up employment there, and her friend has sent an escort: the very handsome and charming Marquess of Attingsborough. Claudia doesn’t need an escort but she can’t easily refuse without giving offence, so off they go, and she finds that the marquess is perfectly gentlemanlike, but has an annoying ability to summon the best service merely by raising a haughty eyebrow.
Joseph isn’t much taken with the prim schoolmistress either, but he has a reason to take an interest in her and her school, which has nothing to do with her personally. She’s not very appealing to him, and besides, he’s on the brink of a pragmatic alliance with the very beautiful and eligible Portia Hunt. He’s not mad keen on Portia, who’s a bit of a cold fish, but she’ll warm up a bit once they’re married – won’t she?

The story bumps along in typical Balogh style, that is to say, the principals are thrown together by circumstance over and over again without (apparently) much agency on their part. The drift into love is the usual slow affair, kept from any resolution by Claudia’s conviction that she’s just a schoolmistress and therefore deeply unworthy of a man who’s going to be a duke one day, plus she just hates dukes. All the aristocracy, in fact, but particularly dukes. For his part, Joseph is determined to do the right thing by his heritage and marry the eminently suitable Portia, even though he’s not enamoured by her.

Into this stupidity comes the reason for Claudia’s dislike of dukes, the Scottish Duke of McLeith, who promised to marry her, deflowered her and then, when he unexpectedly went off to become a duke, forgot all about her and left her languishing. No wonder she hated him, and applied her disdain to the whole of dukedom. Anyone would.

Beneath this adult emotional muddle is a hefty dose of sickly sweet sentimentalism, in the shape of a child and a dog. In lesser hands this would be positively indigestible, but Balogh is talented enough to pull it off – just! This leads to the big crisis which might finally get him free of his commitment to the unpleasant Portia – or will it? The question is spun out to the nth degree of course, and meanwhile Joseph and Claudia are getting into bed together, because heaven forfend that a Balogh heroine should ever be sensible.

This is the final part of the series, but in some ways it’s also part of the preceding Bedwyns series, too, because the characters from that turn up all over the place here, as well as the characters from earlier books in this series. Frankly, it made for way, WAY too many characters, especially as they all have Christian names as well as titles. I gave up several books ago trying to keep track of them all, and just let it all wash over me.

I probably sound a bit negative, but Balogh has that effect on me. Her Regency appears superficially to be authentic, but there’s too much modernism in it, too much angst and sentimentalism, and I really, really wish her heroines wouldn’t get their kit off quite so readily, at least until they have a promise from the hero. But really, sleeping with a man who’s promised to someone else or (worse) that she herself has decided not to marry is insanity in an era when having a child out of wedlock was a very quick way to end up in the workhouse, an asylum or on the streets.

On the other hand, the author is still one of the best writers out there, so even as I grumble through each book, I read it avidly, neglecting everything else to get to the final chapter. So five stars it is.

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Review: Simply Magic by Mary Balogh (2007)

Posted October 14, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

A very different hero in this book, Peter being far more of a beta than anything else. He’s kind to everyone, especially ladies, flirting with the young ones and being chatty and attentive to the older females, but is there anything more to him than frivolity? I liked him very much. Susanna is more difficult to like, frankly. And I’m getting heartily sick of slow, angsty romances, single women hopping into bed with a bloke without a care in the world, complicated backstories and couples who just won’t admit they’re in love. Plus coincidences everywhere, and the whole ‘last time we’ll ever meet’ thing repeated fourteen times. But it’s Mary Balogh, so there’s that.

Here’s the premise: Susanna Osbourne is another of the teachers at Miss Martin’s school for girls in Bath. She was taken in as a charity girl at the age of twelve, and then stayed on as a teacher, which she’s brilliant at, natch. Oh yes, and she’s stunningly beautiful, as all Balogh’s characters seem to be. On a summer holiday visiting a friend, she meets Peter, Viscount Whitleaf, and recognises him from her pre-school childhood, but in a negative way. He lived on a neighbouring estate, the precious only son, too good to mingle with the daughter of Lord Markham’s secretary.

She instantly despises him, but he sets himself to win her over, as he does with all females, but recognising her very different character, he doesn’t flirt with her, treating her as an equal and friend. Needless to say, she responds to his charm, realising that he’s not quite the shallow rattle she’d thought him. By the end of their two weeks, they end up having sex. Why? Because this is a Balogh book. In the previous two books, the sex made some sense but in this one, it just doesn’t.

And then, they separate, never to meet again. Until they do. Repeat ad nauseam. Well, perhaps that’s not quite fair, because every time they do meet, their interactions are fascinating. Because Balogh. And gradually, the whole of Susanna’s tragic history is revealed, inch by inch. I’m going to be honest here and say that some elements of the plot made no sense to me, leaving all sorts of unanswered questions dangling. For instance: we never find out why Lady Markham thought Susanna would be such a burden (and it was what drove her to run away, after all); we don’t know how her uncle died; I’m not at all clear why Susanna had such an aversion to Peter’s mother, since she doesn’t know until almost the end of the book what she actually did; and why didn’t Susanna know about her grandparents?

But (and it’s a big but) it doesn’t really matter, because the romance is the heart of the book and that works fine. I’d have liked it if they’d accepted that they were more than friends a bit earlier. That whole business of ‘I love him/her but I can’t marry him/her because he/she doesn’t love me’ thing went on way, way too long. But finally Peter gets it, and decides that he’s going to be decisive, deal with his mother, take control of his estate and pursue Susanna seriously. A bit late, but better late than never. And then there’s the whole big wedding thing that Balogh absolutely loves, even though it really wasn’t a thing in the Regency. But never mind.

This all sounds very critical, and maybe I was just in the wrong mood for this or maybe it suffered from being the third in the series and perhaps the weakest and maybe I just misunderstood bits of it. But despite all my grumbles, I did enjoy it and tore through it in no time and Peter was thoroughly endearing, so I’m only going to knock it down to four stars. And now on to the final book of the series and the headmistress, Claudia Martin. I’m very curious to see how Balogh gets her into bed with the hero.

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Review: Simply Love by Mary Balogh (2006)

Posted August 15, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

I really don’t like the wounded war hero trope. I dislike any story which focuses too closely on the appearance of the characters, whether too beautiful or too damaged (and in this case, the hero is both!). It really should be the character that matters. But of course even the most trite of tropes is within Mary Balogh’s scope and she does pull it off, but only just.

Here’s the premise: Anne Jewell’s life has been difficult, ever since she was raped and left with an illegitimate child. David is nine now, and they’ve found a safe haven at a girls’ school in Bath, but when a relation invites them to join the Duke of Bewcastle’s family in Wales for a month, she knows there will be other children for David to play with and she can’t deny him the holiday. The Duke of Bewcastle is the head of the Bedwyn clan, from the Slightly series, and they’re all there, all in happily married couples, with a nursery full of children. For anyone who’s into extended epilogues, this is a humongous example. I found it a bit much, frankly, but there you go.

Just about the only unattached person there is Sydnam Butler, the wounded war hero mentioned above, now living almost as a recluse as steward on the duke’s remote Welsh estate. The first time Anne sees him, she first sees his undamaged left side, described as being extraordinarily beautiful, but when he turns and she sees the ravaged right side of his face, she runs away in terror. An inauspicious beginning, but they gradually become friends of a sort, opening up a little to each other as they each see the other as a kindred spirit, both of them damaged by their pasts.

This being a Balogh book, there has to be sex in it, which actually made some sense in this case (it isn’t always so obvious in some of her books, where the sex is there more because she always puts sex in her books than for any character-driven reason). But here there is a good reason for it. They do actually have the hots for each other, but there’s also the issue of his missing bits and bobs, and her previous bad experience, so it’s very experimental, for both of them. And it doesn’t go well. And then there are consequences…

A major grumble: when Sydnam realises he needs to get to Anne in a hurry, but he has business matters to clear up in Wales and then he has to go to London first, why on earth doesn’t he write to let her know he’s coming. A few short lines would be all that would be necessary: ‘On my way, be with you Tuesday week’. But no, he leaves her guessing and worrying. Not sure what the point of that was. And why did he go to London for a special licence anyway? A bishop’s licence, which he could have got in Bath in half the time, would have done the job. But Balogh seems to leap for the special licence as a first resort. Maybe she doesn’t know about a bishop’s licence?

Anyway, the two marry in as much haste as Sydnam’s jauntering around can manage, and the rest of the book is about their adjustment to married life, David’s adjustment to having a father figure in his life and visiting their families. None of this is particularly surprising, although of course with Balogh’s talent it’s never uninteresting, and she reaches all the emotional high and low notes beautifully.

I’m still reading these books avidly, but I am a little jaded by so many excessively beautiful characters, the sex and the horrible back stories. I probably should have read them more slowly, but there we are. In some ways this is a five star read, but my dislike of the wounded hero trope keeps it to four stars for me.

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Review: Simply Unforgettable by Mary Balogh (2005)

Posted August 15, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Another trope-fest from Mary Balogh: the trapped-in-a-snowstorm story, the hate-each-other couple who instantly fall into bed together, the class differences, proud heroine, irascible hero… stop me if you’ve heard it all before. And yet the author sprinkles her own special brand of magic dust over it and it just works.

Here’s the premise: Frances Allard is a teacher at a girls’ school in Bath, returning there after a Christmas visit to her great-aunts. Her antiquated coach is overtaken in snow by a much faster vehicle, and they end up stuck in a snowdrift. The owner of the other vehicle is obliged to take Frances to the nearest inn, which turns out to be temporarily deserted, the innkeeper and his wife being away visiting. What a strange Regency world this is where everyone travels about in mid-winter. Frances takes charge of the kitchen, since it turns out she’s a wonderful cook, while her rescuer, when he’s not haranguing her, sets himself to chopping wood.

He tells her he’s Lucius Marshall, but he’s really Viscount Sinclair, heir to the Earl of Edgecombe, very grumpy because his grandfather the earl is dying and wants him to marry before he shuffles off the mortal coil. Lucius has enjoyed being free, and he’s not much enamoured of his chosen bride, Portia Hunt, who’s perfect in every way, but cold. There’s no affection between them, just an acceptance that the marriage will happen, eventually. And eventually is coming up very fast. Portia is a little like the proposed bride in Heyer’s The Corinthian, eligible but not someone the hero feels anything for. It would be merely a duty marriage.

In the midst of this situation, Lucius finds himself stuck in the deserted inn with a woman who’s very far from perfect (a teacher! And a spirited combatant, to boot) but there’s a distinct spark between them. After a day of essentially playing childish games in the snow, they end up in bed together, where the virginal heroine is instantly orgasmic, because of course she is. All Balogh’s heroines are, for some reason.

They then continue their journey to Bath, hand in hand in the shared carriage, very happy with themselves, until he offers her a position as his latest mistress and she turns him down in order to stay as a humble teacher. They part on bad terms, half angry and half miserable, expecting never to meet again. Well, needless to say, fate throws them together again, where Lucius discovers that Frances has the sort of singing voice that would make her famous. She’s happy to hide her light under a bushel but he’s determined to give her the career as a star that her talent deserves. Even when she tells him very clearly that she doesn’t want that, he manipulates and organises and makes it happen anyway.

Now, I like a determined hero as much as anyone, and if his energies were solely focused on making her happy and winning her heart, I couldn’t fault him. But when he decides he knows what she wants better than she knows herself, that goes too far. She calls him a bully and it’s hard to disagree. One of the principal requirements in a hero, to my mind, is respecting the heroine enough to allow her to make her own decisions, and Lucius fails completely.

As it happens, it isn’t quite the disaster it might have been, and the legal obstacles that had entangled her were easily resolved. Kudos to the author for getting the legalities exactly right.

I considered knocking off a star for the bullying hero, but in the end the writing is so good and I tore through this so fast that I can’t in all conscience give it fewer than five stars.

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Review: Slightly Dangerous by Mary Balogh (2004)

Posted July 8, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

This was always going to be the most fascinating book of the series. Wulfric, the Duke of Bewcastle, has been sketched in as a man without emotion, but we’ve seen in the last couple of books, first when his brother Alleyne was believed to be dead, and later when he is found again, that Wulfric isn’t really emotionless and cold at all. But he’s created such high walls around himself that it’s hard to see how any potential duchess can get past his defences.

Christine Derrick is not your typical potential duchess, however. She’s gauche and clumsy, constantly in some scrape or other, and she’s not the least bit cowed by the haughty, aristocratic duke. Far from dropping her eyes when he stares at her, she outstares him, and even as he deplores her lack of elegant manners, he’s drawn to her. She is the very opposite of him: where he is (seemingly) cold and devoid of humanity, she is fizzing with life, bringing light and joy to everyone. Even ice-cold dukes, apparently.

The challenge for an author with setting up a character as dramatic as Wulfric is to allow him to fall in love without losing the very essence of his character. It becomes necessary to show those walls coming down without somehow changing him. A man who has hidden his nature from the world for almost two decades is simply not going to melt into a puddle of emotional longing overnight. Balogh pulls this off superbly. She shows the reader both the reason for Wulfric’s protective shield and also how Christine works her way past his defences. Their moments of high drama are more about anger and violent quarrels than anything romantic. It makes for a powerful and compelling story.

This review must act as a summary of the whole series, too. I liked the varied characters, the six Bedwyns, very different from each other but united as a family. I liked the complicated backstories Balogh wove into the romances. I liked the settings, from Bath and London to the grand country houses. Balogh doesn’t spend too long on extraneous nothings like travelling; she gets straight to the next encounter between hero and heroine. I disliked the way all these heroines rushed into bed with the heroes, under the most improbable of circumstances. Sex was a huge deal for an upper-class Regency woman, and the lucky-I’m-not-pregnant casualness of it all grated on me. And naturally the virgins are all instantly orgasmic. {Rolls eyes}

But in the end, Mary Balogh gets me in the feels every time. Her women might be a little too modern and her Regency is slightly wonky to my eyes, but the writing is superb, and I tore through the entire series in double-quick time. This final book is the best of an excellent series. Five stars.

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Review: Slightly Tempted by Mary Balogh (2004)

Posted July 8, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

There’s an acronym for a certain kind of heroine: TSTL. It stands for too stupid to live, and much as I hate to say it, Lady Morgan Bedwyn falls into that category. She’s only eighteen, so I ought to cut her some slack, but she keeps reminding herself that she’s a Bedwyn and she’s up to all the rakish tricks of the guy targeting her, and then she goes right ahead and allows him to manipulate her anyway. Sample (paraphrased):

Him: Let’s leave this well-lit path and disappear into the dark forest so I can steal a kiss from you.
Her: You must think I’m stupid! Take a hike.
Him: I see what it is, you’re afraid.
Her: I am so not afraid! What an idea! Let’s leave this well-lit path and disappear into the dark forest. I might even let you kiss me…

Stupid, stupid, stupid. Does she not know what happens to girls of eighteen who disappear into dark forests with hardened rakes? And then when it’s obvious that there’s going to be a big battle and that she’ll be caught up in it if she stays, she refuses all efforts to get her to safety and stays on anyway. Madness.

Here’s the premise: Morgan is bored out of her mind by her first season in London, so when the opportunity offers to travel to Brussels with a friend and her family, she grasps it eagerly. But Brussels, she finds, is just as caught up in meaningless frivolity, despite the likelihood of a battle with the escaped Bonaparte in the very near future. Here, however, she’s spotted by Gervase, the Earl of Rosthorn, who sees her as the perfect vehicle for his revenge against her brother, the Duke of Bewcastle. He sets out to tempt her off the narrow path of propriety and damage her reputation. And she lets him. {Rolls eyes} And then she refuses to leave on the eve of battle because her brother is missing. {Rolls eyes even harder} This is so stupid, it’s clearly just a plot device to throw the hero and heroine together.

And thrown together they are, as she helps the wives of various military men tend the wounded and he tries to find her brother, to no avail. And when it seems as if Alleyne is dead, Gervase escorts her home, where they discover that her brother the duke is seriously unamused by all this. Gervase very properly offers for her, the duke refuses out of hand. But when Morgan finds out, and realises that he targeted her purely to revenge himself on the duke, she agrees to marry him anyway, and exact her own revenge on him. Which is all pretty stupid. And of course, like seemingly all Balogh heroines, she lusts after him and allows him to seduce her, or at least to take advantage of her naivety. Do these women never think of the possible consequences of what they’re doing?

So, I’m sorry, even though it’s Balogh and therefore a wonderful read in many ways, the stupidity of the heroine keeps it to three stars. And I’m not much taken with a supposed hero who takes revenge on people who’ve injured him by hurting someone who had nothing at all to do with it. Yuk.

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Review: Slightly Scandalous by Mary Balogh (2003)

Posted July 7, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Another in the series that starts with a bang, with a dramatic midnight encounter at a roadside inn, and never lets up for a minute. But that’s entirely in keeping with the characters of our hero and heroine, the wild and independent Lady Freyja Bedwyn and reckless, rakish Joshua, Marquess of Hallmere.

Here’s the premise: Freyja, the elder of two sisters of the Duke of Bewcastle, has run away to Bath, boring as it is, to avoid the imminent confinement of the wife of the man she’d loved and hoped to marry. On the journey, her sleep is disturbed by a man entering her room to evade some pursuers. Even though he’s clearly a criminal of some kind, it amuses her to hide him. But in one of the coincidences that Balogh loves, there he is in Bath, and wouldn’t you just know it, he’s the Marquess of Hallmere. In no time flat, the two are causing all sorts of ructions in Bath’s sedate society, each intrigued by the other but equally determined never to admit to the least attraction. When Josh’s manipulative aunt appears with plans to marry him off to his cousin, he persuades Freyja into a fake betrothal to keep his aunt at bay.

I’ve never quite understood why any man would be troubled by this sort of scheming because men can’t be pressured into marriage in the way that women can be. So long as they’re alert to the possibility of compromising situations, they don’t have to do anything they don’t want to do. Still, it’s such a common trope in Regencies, and it makes for such a good story that I forgive it. Instantly there are all sorts of complications and the story notches up a gear.

I have to say, these two are among my favourite types of character. Freyja is the original wild child, up for any scheme that she thinks will amuse her, no matter how outrageous, and Josh is the consummate charming, roguish hero, a bit rakish but (as is usual) not nearly as bad as his reputation suggests.

As with all Baloghs, there some fairly graphic sex in there, but it fits with the nature of the two characters. There are some modern ideas as well, especially as relates to disabilities, and I wasn’t at all sure about the resolution for one character in particular, but it wasn’t a big deal.
Beautifully written, as always, with very few Americanisms apart from a few spelling differences. I enjoyed this one enough to rate it as five stars.

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Review: Slightly Wicked by Mary Balogh (2003)

Posted July 7, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Book 2 of the Bedwyns series, and after the slow start to book 1, this one starts in spectacular fashion and never quite lets go. It’s a bit of a trope-fest, but very readable, for all that.

Here’s the premise: Judith Law is travelling on a dismal journey, leaving behind her family to become the poor relation after her charming but feckless brother brings debt on the household. A public stagecoach is a miserable affair for a gently brought up woman, and her daydreams of a handsome highwayman scooping her up and riding away with her are poor comfort. But when the coach overturns and a lone horseman offers to rescue her, the temptation is too great. And when her rescuer offers her a brief liaison while they are trapped at a provincial posting house, she seizes the opportunity. At least she will have a little happiness to look back on in her dreary future. And her two nights of passion are all she had hoped they would be.

Unfortunately for Judith, Lord Rannulf Bedwyn isn’t the ship that passes in the night. He’s staying at the neighbouring estate to her relations, and is the principal suitor for the hand of their daughter, Judith’s cousin. There’s no avoiding him, and although he now realises she isn’t the actress and courtesan he originally thought, and offers for her from guilt, she refuses and leaves him free to pursue her cousin.

I’ve said that the book is a positive trope-fest, and it’s absolutely true. Quite apart from the penniless poor relation trope, there’s the silly ingenue trope (we can blame Georgette Heyer for that one), the overbearing aunt who treats Judith as a servant, the lecherous bloke who tries to rape Judith, the compromise-the-hero-into-marrying plot device, the heroine who doesn’t realise how beautiful she is trope, the heroine who runs away constantly, and finally, the revenge plot (which I won’t spell out, to avoid spoiling the surprise, but none of it will surprise experienced readers of Regencies).

Nevertheless, Judith is a sympathetic heroine – I confess, I’m a sucker for the Cinderella-type story, where the heroine does eventually go to the ball. And Rannulf makes for a wonderful hero, even if it takes him far too long to realise that he wants to marry Judith and not the silly ingenue.

This being a Mary Balogh story, there is, naturally, a whole heap of sex of the relatively graphic variety, but since those two nights of passion are the whole foundation of the story, it’s hard to quibble about it. The other characters are relatively minor, or else unpleasant, so they don’t merit much discussion. I confess I got muddled sometimes by the two grandmothers, and wasn’t always sure which one was being talked of. Another compelling read, but the weight of familiar tropes keeps it to four stars.

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Review: Slightly Married by Mary Balogh (2003)

Posted July 7, 2026 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Many moons ago, I came across a list of all Mary Balogh’s books, ranked in order from best to worst, from 1 down to number 48. It only went up to the mid-2010s, so not definitive, but it was a strong indication of which of her early works were worth reading and which might safely be passed over. Some of them I managed to track down and read, but far too many just weren’t available on Kindle in the UK, including the two top-rated books. And now they are. At long last, the Bedwyns series (Slightly…) is out on the Kindle. I’ve scooped up the whole series, and also the similarly unavailable Simply… series, and am prepared to settle in for some serious catchup reading, starting here with book 1 (although there are two prequels, which I have in fact read).

Here’s the premise: Colonel Lord Aidan Bedwyn’s life was saved by a junior officer, Percy Morris, so when Percy dies in battle, he asks Aidan to take care of his sister, ‘no matter what’. Aidan visits Eve Morris at her home to convey the news of Percy’s death, and to ask what service he may render her, to fulfil Percy’s dying wish. She refuses his aid, but he then finds out that she’s about to be turned out of her home, along with all the waifs and strays she acquired over the years (because she’s a pretty modern do-gooding woman beneath her Regency bonnet). In one of those quirky wills so beloved of Regency authors, her father left her the estate and fortune for one year only. If she marries within the year, it stays hers, otherwise it goes to her brother, Percy, or failing that, to an unpleasant cousin. There are just four days before cousin Cecil inherits, but Aidan knows where his duty lies; within hours, he’s whisked Eve off to London for a special licence and a hasty wedding. After that, they’ll separate for good. A true marriage of convenience.

I did wonder why they bothered to go up to London for a special licence when they could have had a bishop’s licence from the nearest cathedral city, since they married in church anyway, but still, it gave them an opportunity for some sightseeing (aka bonding) before returning to her home. He stays for a few days to see off the unpleasant cousin and enjoy a dance at a celebration ball (the mourning for her brother is glossed over a bit too easily, frankly; she really shouldn’t be dancing but never mind).

Aidan finally takes off for his own home, planning never to mention his marriage to a soul, since his brother the Duke of Bewcastle would hardly approve. Too bad, then, that while in London he’d bumped into a military acquaintance and introduced Eve as his wife. So the secret is soon out, and lo and behold, Lord and Lady Aidan are invited to a celebration dinner at Carlton House with the Prince of Wales. Wulf (the duke) is determined that Lady Aidan will be there and won’t disgrace the Bedwyn name, and what Wulf wants, he usually gets.

I confess that the early chapters, setting up the marriage that everyone knows is coming (it’s right there in the blurb), were a bit slow. I appreciated that we weren’t dumped with the whole Bedwyn family all at once, which would have been a bit much, but on the other hand, the whole book perks up a great deal once Wulf and co get involved. And once Eve is persuaded up to London to be transformed into a society lady, the tension between the Eve and Aidan, and between Wulf and everyone, ramps up to eleven.

Just to complicate things, there are previous loves to be taken into account, one serious (for Eve) and one more nebulous (for Aidan), and the unpleasant cousin hasn’t entirely given up his meddling. So lots to be unravelled before our hero and heroine settle down to their saccharine-sweet life of domestic bliss.

Like all Mary Balogh’s books, there is sex in fairly graphic detail, although tastefully done, and it’s not excessive. I didn’t notice any horrible anachronisms or excessive Americanisms, although the spelling of ‘honor’ jumped out at me every time, and there was one mention of ‘passing’ instead of death. It is a wonderful read (it’s Mary Balogh, for heaven’s sake, so of course it is) and it gets the emotional depth pitch perfect. I wouldn’t actually have rated this the second-best book she’s ever written, as my ranked list shows, and that slow start keeps it to a very good four stars.

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Review: Christmas Belle by Mary Balogh (1994)

Posted October 14, 2024 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

A much better read than the first book in the series (The First Snowdrop, to which I gave three stars – for a Mary Balogh book!). This one has a vastly improved hero, and two possible brides for him, both trying to do their best in difficult circumstances.

Here’s the premise: Jack Frazer has been invited to spend Christmas with his ducal grandparents, along with their vast family, a lot of organised events he’ll be required to participate in, and his future bride. At least, a young lady has been invited, and Jack will be expected to court her and, if they like each other, to propose. He’s not much minded for marriage, having enjoyed his freedom very much, thank you, but he finds himself obeying the summons and meeting the young lady, only to discover that, while she’s very pretty, she’s also very young, a petite, doll-like creature who looks as if she’s straight out of the schoolroom.

Meanwhile, the main entertainment of the festivities is to be provided by a renowned actress, Isabella, the Comtesse de Vacheron, who will perform several extracts from Shakespeare, with the aid of a supporting cast provided by the family. She’s a widow with two children, and remarkably respectable for an actress, having been feted in both France and Britain. There’s only one problem – she was Jack’s mistress for a year nine years ago, a relationship that ended in anger and bitterness. Neither is happy to find the other at the party, but they agree quite early on to leave the past where it belongs and avoid each other as much as possible.

The reader knows, of course, how well that’s going to work out. What makes this whole setup so interesting is that Jack’s potential bride, Juliana Beckford, is also given equal billing with the two principals, so we see her thoughts and feelings as well as Jack’s and Bella’s. I liked Juliana very much. Some reviewers called her spineless, but I think she’s a perfect Regency lady, well brought up, if very innocent and unversed in the ways of the world, and she puts her duty and obedience to her parents above her own wishes. They have arranged a very prestigious marriage for her to the grandson of a duke, a man of independent wealth, and even though she worries about him being so much older and more experienced than her, and she isn’t in love with him, she sets out to do what she feels is the right thing.

Jack, too, is determined to do the right thing. He accepts at an early stage that he’s going to offer for her, and sets himself to court her conscientiously, taking things slowly because he realises she’s very innocent. And if he has reservations about her youth and his lack of physical desire for her, he tells himself that will grow, and that he can make her happy. He’s being honourable and mature and not trying to recapture his youth with Bella, and that makes him a proper hero in my book.

Bella I’m less sure of. I’m not much enamoured of heroines who are so driven to succeed in their chosen profession that they essentially sabotage every other part of their lives. But I suppose she was young and naive and caught in a difficult situation when she was Jack’s mistress, and as a mother she can’t be faulted. She puts her children first, always, and I can only applaud that. The children, actually, are a real highlight of the book. They’re not merely ciphers or plot devices or there to be winsomely cute or wilfully awful. Things do get a bit schmaltzy towards the end, but Balogh keeps it just on the right side.

I do dislike the obvious double standard. One of the reasons Jack and Bella fell out was because he was convinced she was sleeping with other men, despite her denials. When he finally realises the truth, there’s an air of: oh, that’s all right then, she’s not a slut after all. Whereas he consoled himself after their parting by sleeping with every woman he could get his hands on. But somehow nothing is ever said about that.

What else grated? The vast assortment of relations, and since most of them are happily paired off with young children, it’s difficult not to believe that there’s a whole series somewhere that told the stories of them all. As it was, the only ones I knew were the awful hero from The First Snowdrop and his wife, and I remembered Freddie (‘I’ve got no brains’) from that book, too, because really, could Balogh not have given him some variation? The whole acting thing was pretty tedious, and apart from the plot device of getting a famous actress to the house, there was no point to it. There was no moment of revelation when Jack and Bella acted together, and all the lurches forwards and back in their relationship happened for other reasons. I’m not a big fan of a Christmas setting with snowball fights and decorating the rooms and the inevitable kissing bough. And did they really have an evening church service in the Regency? And please, please, please can we banish the obligatory skating on the lake scene, followed by the mind-numbingly predictable falling through the ice scene. It’s been done. It’s old.

But despite my grumbles, I really loved this book – mostly! I can’t quite give it five stars, but Balogh did her usual trick of making me cry several times, so let’s call it a very good four stars. Warning: it’s Balogh so there are sex scenes.

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