I really don’t like the wounded war hero trope. I dislike any story which focuses too closely on the appearance of the characters, whether too beautiful or too damaged (and in this case, the hero is both!). It really should be the character that matters. But of course even the most trite of tropes is within Mary Balogh’s scope and she does pull it off, but only just.
Here’s the premise: Anne Jewell’s life has been difficult, ever since she was raped and left with an illegitimate child. David is nine now, and they’ve found a safe haven at a girls’ school in Bath, but when a relation invites them to join the Duke of Bewcastle’s family in Wales for a month, she knows there will be other children for David to play with and she can’t deny him the holiday. The Duke of Bewcastle is the head of the Bedwyn clan, from the Slightly series, and they’re all there, all in happily married couples, with a nursery full of children. For anyone who’s into extended epilogues, this is a humongous example. I found it a bit much, frankly, but there you go.
Just about the only unattached person there is Sydnam Butler, the wounded war hero mentioned above, now living almost as a recluse as steward on the duke’s remote Welsh estate. The first time Anne sees him, she first sees his undamaged left side, described as being extraordinarily beautiful, but when he turns and she sees the ravaged right side of his face, she runs away in terror. An inauspicious beginning, but they gradually become friends of a sort, opening up a little to each other as they each see the other as a kindred spirit, both of them damaged by their pasts.
This being a Balogh book, there has to be sex in it, which actually made some sense in this case (it isn’t always so obvious in some of her books, where the sex is there more because she always puts sex in her books than for any character-driven reason). But here there is a good reason for it. They do actually have the hots for each other, but there’s also the issue of his missing bits and bobs, and her previous bad experience, so it’s very experimental, for both of them. And it doesn’t go well. And then there are consequences…
A major grumble: when Sydnam realises he needs to get to Anne in a hurry, but he has business matters to clear up in Wales and then he has to go to London first, why on earth doesn’t he write to let her know he’s coming. A few short lines would be all that would be necessary: ‘On my way, be with you Tuesday week’. But no, he leaves her guessing and worrying. Not sure what the point of that was. And why did he go to London for a special licence anyway? A bishop’s licence, which he could have got in Bath in half the time, would have done the job. But Balogh seems to leap for the special licence as a first resort. Maybe she doesn’t know about a bishop’s licence?
Anyway, the two marry in as much haste as Sydnam’s jauntering around can manage, and the rest of the book is about their adjustment to married life, David’s adjustment to having a father figure in his life and visiting their families. None of this is particularly surprising, although of course with Balogh’s talent it’s never uninteresting, and she reaches all the emotional high and low notes beautifully.
I’m still reading these books avidly, but I am a little jaded by so many excessively beautiful characters, the sex and the horrible back stories. I probably should have read them more slowly, but there we are. In some ways this is a five star read, but my dislike of the wounded hero trope keeps it to four stars for me.

Another trope-fest from Mary Balogh: the trapped-in-a-snowstorm story, the hate-each-other couple who instantly fall into bed together, the class differences, proud heroine, irascible hero… stop me if you’ve heard it all before. And yet the author sprinkles her own special brand of magic dust over it and it just works.
This was always going to be the most fascinating book of the series. Wulfric, the Duke of Bewcastle, has been sketched in as a man without emotion, but we’ve seen in the last couple of books, first when his brother Alleyne was believed to be dead, and later when he is found again, that Wulfric isn’t really emotionless and cold at all. But he’s created such high walls around himself that it’s hard to see how any potential duchess can get past his defences.
There’s an acronym for a certain kind of heroine: TSTL. It stands for too stupid to live, and much as I hate to say it, Lady Morgan Bedwyn falls into that category. She’s only eighteen, so I ought to cut her some slack, but she keeps reminding herself that she’s a Bedwyn and she’s up to all the rakish tricks of the guy targeting her, and then she goes right ahead and allows him to manipulate her anyway. Sample (paraphrased):
Another in the series that starts with a bang, with a dramatic midnight encounter at a roadside inn, and never lets up for a minute. But that’s entirely in keeping with the characters of our hero and heroine, the wild and independent Lady Freyja Bedwyn and reckless, rakish Joshua, Marquess of Hallmere.
Book 2 of the Bedwyns series, and after the slow start to book 1, this one starts in spectacular fashion and never quite lets go. It’s a bit of a trope-fest, but very readable, for all that.
Many moons ago, I came across a list of all Mary Balogh’s books, ranked in order from best to worst, from 1 down to number 48. It only went up to the mid-2010s, so not definitive, but it was a strong indication of which of her early works were worth reading and which might safely be passed over. Some of them I managed to track down and read, but far too many just weren’t available on Kindle in the UK, including the two top-rated books. And now they are. At long last, the Bedwyns series (Slightly…) is out on the Kindle. I’ve scooped up the whole series, and also the similarly unavailable Simply… series, and am prepared to settle in for some serious catchup reading, starting here with book 1 (although there are two prequels, which I have in fact read).
A much better read than the first book in the series (The First Snowdrop, to which I gave three stars – for a Mary Balogh book!). This one has a vastly improved hero, and two possible brides for him, both trying to do their best in difficult circumstances.
One of the things I most admire about Mary Balogh is her ability to look unflinchingly at her characters and their behaviour. This is one of those cases where I rather wish she had flinched, and given the hero at least one or two redeeming features. This was her first published work, so perhaps one should make allowances, but it’s difficult. This is a fairly ranty review so it’s quite spoilerish. Don’t read unless you want to know most of the plot.
These early Baloghs are a bit of a mixed bag, but even at their worst, they show flashes of the author’s brilliance, and at their best, they’re superb. After a so-so last Balogh (The First Snowdrop), this one was definitely in the superb category, although as with all older books, the reviews are fairly mixed.