Author: Mary Kingswood

Review: Petteril’s Christmas by Mary Lancaster (2024)

Posted January 10, 2025 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

For the first time, a Petteril book turned out to be slightly less than a perfect read for me. Probably just me in the wrong frame of mind, although it crossed my mind that maybe the series has hit the Mulder and Scully problem – the romantic tension of the early books has evaporated now that the principals are married, and there just isn’t that much drama between them. Added to which, the mystery really wasn’t any great shakes this time. All the tension, such as it was, revolves around April’s history, which isn’t uninteresting, but I didn’t find it as riveting as some of the earlier books.

There were some intriguing new characters, like Great Aunt Prudence and her eccentric entourage, some I would have liked to have seen but didn’t (like Gussie, ill for the whole book), and a fair few that seemed to be repeat characters but I didn’t remember them. But that’s a problem I have with any long-running series, so I’m not going to blame the author for it.

I suspect the biggest problem I had with this book is that it didn’t surprise me at all. April running off looking for trouble and not bothering to tell Piers about it is old news now, and although it may be a necessary stage in the development of their relationship, I just wanted to slap her upside the head sometimes. He’s your husband, dear, so trust him, and let him help you.

All that said, this was still an enjoyable read, and a welcome return of the two ill-assorted lovers. Four stars and I hope the next book is a bit more on my wavelength.

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Review: Summer Escapade by Charlotte Louise Dolan (2014)

Posted January 10, 2025 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

A very short read with a preposterous plot, and too little time to develop characters, or add sub-plot or, frankly, create a rich, immersive reading experience.

Here’s the premise: Marigold Kinderley is fourteen, and an orphan. Her uncle Terence is so terrified that she will succumb to illness like her mother that he insists on her taking no risks, and even keeps her on a special diet. She is finally allowed to attend a school for a term where she makes just one friend – Lady Sybil Dunmire. When Sybil is invited to bring another friend, Clara, home for the summer, she decides it would be fun to smuggle Marigold home in Clara’s place. What could possibly go wrong?

When Terence comes looking for Marigold, Sybil manages to send him off on a wild goose chase to Gretna after the school’s dancing master. And while he’s doing that, Marigold is learning to enjoy life, romping with Sybil and her six male cousins, being mothered by Sybil’s widowed mother, Alicia, and eating anything and everything. Terence is astonished to discover (when he eventually discovers the truth) that Marigold has not merely survived the experience unscathed but has thrived on it.

But where is the romance, you might be asking. Well, Terence and Alicia are the happy couple, and because this is merely a novella, and the childrens’ high-jinks take up so much space, it’s a very perfunctory affair. They meet, they’re attracted to each other, there’s a brief misunderstanding, it’s all sorted out. And that’s it.

There was the potential to deepen the characters sufficiently to make this a much better book, but frankly the whole premise is so over-the-top that I think it’s best left as it is. It’s perfectly readable, and even enjoyable (as long as realism isn’t on your wish list), but it’s the bare bones of the story, rather than the usual richly detailed affair. Three stars.

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Review: An Angel For The Earl by Barbara Metzger (1994)

Posted January 10, 2025 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

A weird book – a sort of (but not quite) ghost is sent to rescue a wastrel earl from his wicked ways. The element of fantasy is certainly different, even if the theme of the rake’s redemption is an old one. But very readable, so long as you can suspend all critical faculties and just let it flow past.

Here’s the premise: Lucinda Faire is about to be pushed into one of those horrible old-enough-to-be-her-grandfather marriages so beloved of Regency authors. Her father keeps her a virtual prisoner at home, so when she manages to meet a halfway plausible and attractive young man, she instantly agrees to elope with him. He, of course, turns out to be a fortune-hunting rogue, and he’s not even planning to marry her. She deals with him and sets off for home, but an accident sees her unconscious and on the point of death. Her parents, lovely people, are quite happy to let her die. But at the pearly gates, they don’t quite know whether to send her to heaven (she’s young and very innocent) or hell (she eloped, silly girl). So she is given a test – redeem one sinner and she’ll get to heaven, and they even tell her the specific sinner they have in mind – Lord Stanford, or Kerry, a licentious, gambling, drunken thorough waste of space.

Right, I know, plausibility is not this book’s strong suit. But as I say, if you just go with the flow, it’s all very entertaining. Lucinda comes upon his lordship on the point of blowing his brains out, having lost absolutely everything. Needless to say, her appearance gives him the shock of his life, and this is one of the clever conceits of the book – Lucinda’s appearance matches his current state of virtue. So initially, she looks like one of the brothel women he’s so fond of, with a revealing dress, bare feet and her hair tumbled about her shoulders. Every time she manages to persuade him to do something ‘good’, she acquires slightly more modest clothing.

The book then proceeds on entirely predictable lines. The earl gradually is induced to become a virtuous man, Lucinda becomes increasingly modestly dressed and the two contrive to fall in love. The ending requires a complete shutdown of every critical faculty, and my historical accuracy meter blew a fuse at the idea of marrying an unconscious woman (there has to be some smidgen of consent involved, surely?), but a resounding happy ending for all that. Too implausible for five stars, but a very entertaining four stars.

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Review: By His Grace And Favor by Christina Dudley (2024)

Posted November 29, 2024 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Another amusing and charming tale from Christina Dudley, the first in a new series following the impoverished Barstow family, their elderly and kindly benefactor and the various characters whose paths cross with them.

Here’s the premise: the Barstow family has, through the death of the father and son, fallen on hard times. Eldest daughter Adela, in desperation, contacts a distant relation, Lord Dere, who offers them a cottage on his estate, but as they prepare to move, second daughter Jane elopes with a roguish man who they fear might not even marry her. As they squeeze themselves into Iffley Cottage, three adults and four children, not to mention a dog and a newly acquired kitten, they agree that nothing must be mentioned of Jane’s predicament, only that she is married, lest Lord Dere think better of his offer to such a disreputable family. But it turns out it’s not Lord Dere who must be appeased at all costs, but his niece by marriage, the widowed Mrs Markham Dere, who has insinuated herself and her son, now heir to the barony, into the baron’s seat, Perryfield, and there rules all before her, including the rather timid baron.

Into this awkward situation comes Mr Gerard Weatherill, the newly recruited tutor for Master Peter Dere, even more impoverished than the Barstows, and with secrets of his own to keep hidden, lest he lose his position. And it doesn’t help that the tutor and the practical eldest daughter have the hots for each other right from the start. Nothing can come of a match between two people who haven’t a bean between them, and besides, Adela has a cunning plan to ensure that they aren’t turfed out when all those messy secrets emerge, as they inevitably will. She’s going to marry the elderly but kindly baron, and keep Mrs Markham Dere in her place for ever.

Of course, this works about as well as you might expect, at least until Adela hears what has actually happened to Jane and her new (but feckless) husband, and grows so desperate that she throws caution to the wind.

There’s so much to love about this book, but especially the characters. The Barstows are a wonderful collection, from baby Sebastian (or Bash) to bouncy young son Gordy to 15-year-old Frances who actually manages to inveigle her way into Mrs Markham Dere’s good books in support of Adela’s hopes. I assume that most of the family will get their own book in time. But there’s also Mrs Markham Dere herself, a gloriously not quite over the top character, and the absolutely lovely baron, who surely deserves his happy ever after at least as much of some of the others.

So why only four stars? A couple of things niggled at me. One is the number of times Adela contrived to trip or fall over or otherwise end up entangled with one or other of the two men, the one she’d fallen in love with and the one she’d grimly decided to marry for her family’s sake. A certain amount of that is fine, and mostly it was very funny, but after a while it did get a bit old, and I’d have liked some variation.

The other issue I had was Adela, who has basically entrapped the baron into a betrothal, and then hangs onto him for grim death, even though their marriage would make a lot of people very unhappy. I really, really wanted her to come to her senses, confess all to the baron and throw herself on his mercy, but she never did, right to the (not very bitter) end, when the happy ending is magicked into being with a wave of a well-manicured hand. It was all a bit deus ex machina, and although I didn’t like that Adela wasn’t told what was happening until the very last minute, I kind of felt she deserved all that anxiety, frankly.

As always, a beautifully written and highly literate book. Five stars and I can’t wait for the next in the series.

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Review: The Counterfeit Gentleman by Charlotte Louise Dolan (1994)

Posted November 29, 2024 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Another very strange read from this author. She really does like melodrama, and sometimes that works and sometimes… hmm, less so. A fine hero, but I’d have liked a bit less of the clingy dependency from the heroine.

Here’s the premise: heiress Bethia Pepperell has been kidnapped, drugged and hauled from London all the way to Cornwall and is about to be dumped into the sea to drown (did I mention the melodrama?), presumably under orders from one of the three cousins who stand to inherit after her death. Miraculously, as she pleads for her life, she’s overheard by ex-smuggler Digory Rendel, unseen in the fog, who contrives to rescue her and leave her would-be murderers thinking she’s drowned. The next day, when they come looking for the body, they meet Digory and his smuggling pals. Unfortunately, their attempts to capture them and find out who sent them end up with both men dead.

Digory’s prepared to help protect Bethia but she knows the only sure way to fix the problem, and that is for the two of them to marry. Since they have the hots for each other, and she’s not at all shy about showing him how she feels, even to the extent of inviting him into her bed and otherwise trying to seduce him, he reluctantly agrees to it, even though he realises that he’s not at all of her station in life. I really felt that Bethia is stepping outside the bounds of propriety and even common sense at this point. Yes, she’s overwhelmed by Digory’s masculinity (or something), but really, girl, get a grip! By hurling herself at him with abandon, she really gives him no choice but to agree to the marriage. Which is pretty silly, frankly.

So they go back to London, where her aunt, whose powers of self-deception know no bounds, happily tells herself that the story she’s been telling that Bethia was laid up with illness is actually true and now she’s better so everything’s fine… isn’t it? And all this worrying about murderous cousins is just nonsense. But Digory summons some very disreputable (but high ranking) friends who will swear to his blameless past and help him marry Bethia, which they do and then show themselves in society so that everyone will think everything’s fine. And then, right at the end, everything goes to hell in a handcart in spectacular fashion. No, it seems an ex-smuggler can’t pass himself off as a gentleman after all.

I’m going to be honest, and say that I really disapproved of both hero and heroine in this one. Bethia was so hot for Digory that she was prepared to do absolutely anything to stay with him, and frankly, I think they should have run off to the continent or America or some such right from the start. It would have saved a lot of bother. As for Digory, with the whole we’ll get married but we won’t really be married schtick – oh, per-lease. Either marry the girl or don’t, but just get over yourself.

My other main quibble is with ‘society’, which is prepared to randomly accept some unknown man because one or two people vouch for him, and then turn against him the instant some other random (and known to be evil) bloke says he’s no good. People, even at the highest levels of society, still have some sense of judgement and don’t accept or reject people purely on the basis of hearsay.

Some historical quibbles. No, you can’t annul a marriage for non-consummation (not in England, anyway). And no, a title once awarded can’t be retracted, even when it turns out it went to the wrong person (in general, anyway; the king could, of course, do whatever he liked about those pesky titles). Money and property, yes, that can be redistributed after the event, but titles, no. What would likely happen if a title has been wrongfully claimed and the true heir turns up is (probably) that he would be given another, equivalent title.

I’m going to be honest – I did enjoy the read, on the whole, but the flaws in the characters of the principals keep it to three stars.

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Review: The Unofficial Suitor by Charlotte Louise Dolan (1992)

Posted November 29, 2024 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 2 Comments

A strange book, which leaves me a bit uncertain what to make of it. There’s some truly dark stuff in the background here, and sometimes it feels as if the author threw in everything but the kitchen sink, but there’s also a wonderful romance (I love a man who knows precisely what he wants) and some amusing moments, too.

Here’s the premise: Lady Cassiopeia Anderby is living a hand-to-mouth existence since her brother, the Earl of Blackstone, has gambled away the family fortune and has been draining the estate of funds for years. But a flying visit shows him that he still has one asset left to sell, namely, Cassie herself. She’s a rare beauty, so she’ll fetch a good price on the marriage mart, won’t she? By threatening Cassie’s younger sister, he persuades her to come to London for the season.

Travelling by stage coach, Cassie, her sister and step-mother Ellen find themselves in company with three very unsavoury-looking characters and when an unexpected snow storm strands them at a country inn (cliches? In a Regency romance? Surely not!), she avoids them as much as possible. They all have to eat, however, so she makes a deal with them – if they bring in wood and see to the fires, she’ll prepare food. The three ladies survive the ordeal unscathed, to Cassie’s surprise, and the next morning the snow has miraculously vanished, so they go on their merry way.

What Cassie doesn’t know (but the reader does) is that the three (Richard Hawke, John Tuke and Perry, now a viscount) are survivors of the American wars and much other drama, returning reluctantly to London to help Perry deal with his recent ennoblement and assorted relatives, and somewhat more reputable than they look. Richard is so enamoured of Cassie’s spirited practicality that he decides on the spot that he’s going to marry her. His friends deride his choice, since he’s now rich enough to buy himself a better wife than the servant that Cassie appears to be. Needless to say, London brings surprises for both sides – she discovers that Richard and Perry are moving in society like respectable gentlemen, and they discover that the servant girl is an earl’s daughter.

The romance is therefore laid out from the start. The obstacle is Cassie’s brother, who gives her a list of three potential suitors that he will accept, and Richard’s name isn’t on it. But there’s another obstacle, too, which is that Cassie finds Richard terrifying. There’s a hint in the book that this is because she’s an innocent, and its her own feelings that terrify her, but I’m not sure I buy that, and frankly, I found her weeping and wailing at the very prospect of innocuous events like driving in the park with him irritating in the extreme. Get a grip, girl! After all, he may be an imposing sort of man, but he’s never been anything but unfailingly kind to her.

Richard being a man who’s (literally) pulled himself up from the gutter, he isn’t going to let a trifling matter like other suitors stand in his way. The stratagems he employs to get rid of them, one by one, are highly enjoyable, even if not strictly honourable. All right, not honourable at all, and his friend Perry does remonstrate with him at one point, but they justify it quite elegantly to themselves. I wasn’t convinced, but at least the author addresses the point.

The romance resolves itself just as you might expect, and there are several other pairings thrown in almost at random towards the end. Memo to authors: not every minor character needs to get their happy ever after, but if you’re going to do it, please try to make it more convincing than this. But for Richard and Cassie, all comes right very satisfactorily, and the evil brother gets his comeuppance, too. Only one major historical error – no, you can’t simply renounce your title and walk away. You don’t have to take your seat in the House of Lords, but the title is settled irrevocably on the heir specified in the original letters patent when the title was created.

An enjoyable read, and I’m used to the plethora of Americanisms now, so that wasn’t more than a few eye-rolling moments. So why only three stars? I really found this an unsettling book. The hero has a very dark past, and although he may be unfailingly honourable in his dealings with the heroine, elsewhere his moral compass is not all it should be. He’s not an out and out evil villain, like Cassie’s brother, but he doesn’t scruple to do whatever it takes to get his own way. If he had given Cassie the option of whether to marry him or not, I could (perhaps) have forgiven him, but he doesn’t. He’s determined to marry her, whether she wants it or not (and she doesn’t; she’s hounded into it), and even though he promises not to touch her until she’s ready, I wouldn’t put any money on him holding to that if she really kept on saying no. So even though I zipped through the book at a rapid pace, and never for one moment considered abandoning it, I disapproved of the hero so much I’m going with three stars.

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Review: The Black Widow by Charlotte Louise Dolan (1992)

Posted November 29, 2024 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

A fascinating and highly original premise, an appealing hero and heroine, some interesting side characters and with a mystery thrown in, to boot – what’s not to like? I tore through this in a couple of days.

Here’s the premise: Demetrius, Lord Thorverton, is happiest raising horses on his Devon stud farm, but an impassioned plea for help from his mother sends him hot-footing it to London to rescue his younger brother from another scrape. It seems he’s fallen under the spell of the alluring lady known as the Black Widow. She’s not actually a widow, but four times she’s been either betrothed to or courted by men who died unexpectedly, so she’s shunned by society as one who puts a curse on any man who goes near her. Demetrius quickly discovers that his brother, along with half the young men of London, are demonstrating their bravery and daring fate by dancing with the Black Widow.

One glance tells Demetrius that Miss Meribe Prestwich— No, wait, let’s talk about those names. Demetrius is acceptably classical, but his younger brother is Collier. Um, a viscount’s brother is named after a coal miner? And whatever sort of name is Maribe? Good grief. I don’t even know how that would be pronounced.

Anyway, as I was saying, one glance tells Demetrius that Miss Meribe Prestwich is no femme fatale, for she’s obviously distressed by her situation. He doesn’t believe in curses, so he undertakes to protect her from the nuisance of foolish young men tempting fate and annoying her by squiring her about himself. Pure altruism, of course, and the fact that she’s young and pretty has nothing at all to do with it. She reluctantly agrees, and things are humming along nicely when someone attacks Demetrius, and calls him by name, to boot. So not a curse, but not random accidents, either. This is about murder.

From then on, the race is on to find out who is behind all these deaths, with the added bonus of trying to prevent Demetrius from becoming the next victim. Frankly, the villain isn’t exactly hard to work out and the dramatic climax is brought about solely because, having worked out not only who the villain must be and deduced that there must have been an accomplice, everybody’s brains apparently switch off and forget some of these important facts. And there’s the usual does-he-love-me-or-is-is-it-gentlemanly-honour business before the hero remembers to tell the heroine that yes, he does love her, actually. And all’s well that ends well.

Not a perfect book by any means, and it’s riddled with Americanisms (gotten, fall, visit with, stoop, and all the usual suspects), and there’s that brain fade at the end, so I can’t give it more than four stars, but it was still a cracking good read.

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Review: An Improper Correspondence by Jayne Davis (2024)

Posted October 28, 2024 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

Another incomparable book from Jayne Davis, an author who always seems to come up with a unique look at the Regency era, without ever stepping outside the bounds of proper behaviour.

Here’s the premise: Joanna Stretton isn’t looking for love, filling her days with caring for her sick mama and helping her papa, rather secretly, with his investment projects. But when she meets handsome and charming Captain Alfred Bengrove, the younger son of a viscount, she can’t resist. He’s only visiting for a week before returning to his regiment in Spain, but he asks Jo to wait for him to return from the war, and she agrees. It’s not a betrothal, but it is a commitment, of sorts. But his family assume it’s a definite betrothal, and then comes the devastating news that Alfred is missing in action.

Happily, he’s only injured and captured by the French, but it’s his writing hand that’s out of action, so he ropes in a fellow captured officer, Captain Robert Delafield, to write his letters home, including those to Joanna. And even when Alfred is well enough to write his own letters, somehow Rob finds a reason to continue to write to Joanna. A most improper correspondence!

And so the stage is set. The reader sees the worst of Alfred, during his time as a prisoner of war in France, and understands that he’s only chasing after Jo for her dowry and the inheritance from her father (she’s an only child and he’s very rich). His obnoxious and snobby family make it obvious, too. And Rob, of course, the hero, is everything that a hero should be – honourable, kind, thoughtful, intelligent and poor. Wait, what? But that doesn’t matter, since she’s so rich… and no, this is not that book, that founders because she’s rich and he’s poor. The only question is how long it will take Jo to switch allegiance once the prisoners return to England. Spoiler: not very long at all. In fact, it all seemed a bit sudden to me. Not the part about wanting to dump the obnoxious Alfred, but the speed with which Jo decided she wanted to marry Rob. But it was a wonderful moment, so let it stand.

If I have a quibble at all (and it’s a minor one), it’s that Jo’s mother, who’s the daughter of an earl, chooses not to use her courtesy title. She could be Lady Frances Stretton after her marriage, but she chooses to be Mrs Stretton, which of course is entirely her right. But given that she’s so conscious of rank, and so keen for Jo to move in the ‘higher society’ of the aristocracy, it seems an odd choice. And then it’s confusing for those who don’t know her. I’m a great believer in everyone being aware of the exact rank of everyone else (or how else is one to know the precise depth to which one is expected to curtsy?). I’ve read several books where the hero introduces himself as simply {Name} and he’s assumed to be Mr Name, when he’s really the Earl of Name (or similar). It’s misleading and potentially embarrassing.

Now in this case, it does lead to some glorious set-downs, such as when the obnoxious Alfred’s even more obnoxious mother patronisingly asks Jo how she would address the daughter of an earl, and she perkily replies, “The one I know, I call Mama.” Which is lovely, but I still think the obnoxious mother ought to be told this sort of thing upfront. And later, when she (a mere viscountess) says she outranks Mrs (or Lady Frances) Stretton, she’s plain wrong. They both have the rank of a viscountess. A daughter of the aristocracy married to a commoner retains her birth rank from her father, leading to the non-intuitive result that of two sisters, both daughters of earls, the one married to a commoner outranks her sister married to a baron, who takes her rank solely from her husband. But that’s a huge digression, and not really relevant.

In summary, another wonderful five-star read from the author. Highly recommended.

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Review: The Other Bennet Sister by Janice Hadlow (2020)

Posted October 28, 2024 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 4 Comments

Well, that was a slog, and no mistake. 673 pages, according to Amazon, and I felt every single one of them. And the worst of it is that nothing happens for most of them, it’s just Mary agonising about about herself, life and everything. There’s a little burst of action right at the end, but really, it was too little, too late.

Here’s the premise: the book looks at possibly the least loved of the Bennet sisters, bookish, sanctimonious prig Mary. The best of the book is found in the early chapters, where Mary’s happy childhood gradually descends into self-loathing as she realises that she is the plain one of the family, and therefore the least valued and least likely to marry well, if at all. Her father has retreated to his study, avoiding his family as much as possible, and her mother, whose sole ambition is to see all her daughters married, is relentlessly negative towards Mary. The other sisters fall into neat pairs, excluding Mary. Only Mrs Hill, the housekeeper, of all people, seems to take an interest in her.

There is one other person who seems to understand Mary’s situation, and that is Charlotte Lucas. Apart from the difference in age (almost ten years, by my calculation), this is a very natural pairing, since Charlotte is also plain and unvalued, and likely to end a spinster. She has the conversation which in P&P she had with Elizabeth, about the need to seize even the smallest opportunity of an advantageous marriage, with Mary instead. Mary takes her advice to heart, and sets out to entice Mr Collins away from his fixation with Elizabeth to herself. She feels (and the reader must surely agree) that she would have made a much better wife for him than Elizabeth, but her mother is discouraging, and in the end Mary fails even to attract his notice, while Charlotte manages to scoop him up from under everyone’s nose.

This part of the book, which intersects with the origin at many points, I found quite tedious. The repetition of key points of the original adds nothing to this book (that was Elizabeth’s story, after all, and to some extent Jane’s and Lydia’s, so the whole of it could have been dropped altogether or passed over relatively quickly. Instead, the lengthy extra passages (so much introspection!) slowed the pace down almost to a halt.

The next section was pretty dull too. Mr Bennet dies (a common strategy in JAFF), the Collinses move into Longbourn and Mary and her mother are homeless (Kitty has conveniently married a clergyman). At first they settle with the Bingleys, where Mary’s mother is quite happy, but Mary, constantly under her mother’s eye, isn’t. Then she tries the Darcys but finds herself very much the outsider in the close knit family grouping of Darcy, Elizabeth and Georgiana. So next she tries the Collinses and Longbourn, and here is where the book comes slightly off the rails.

Initially, Charlotte and Mr Collins are very much as in the book. Charlotte manages the household (and her husband!) with a sure eye, keeping him happy but out of her hair as much as possible. Mr Collins seems contented enough, but Mary thinks he’s a little sad. Because she’s still bookish and still trying to ‘improve’ herself, she sets about Mr Collins’ library and ropes him in to her reading program, to advise and guide and instruct her, just as she tried before, when she hoped to marry him herself. But this time, Mr Collins responds, and lo and behold, he turns out to be something of an intellectual, smart, thoughtful, intelligent and even self-aware. So not like Mr Collins at all, who would never have been able to see the ridiculousness of his own buffoonery. But here he actually reflects on it to Mary, and talks about his marriage. And Charlotte even becomes jealous of his growing closeness to Mary! As if!

So Mary makes a final leap to Gracechurch Street and the Gardiners, and this is where, at long last, the book actually starts to develop something resembling a plot. Mary has a makeover, which happily just smartens her up a bit without making her a raging beauty, and then there are two suitors on the scene competing for Mary’s hand, the long postponed trip to the Lakes finally takes place, and things actually happen (hallelujah!). None of it is terribly surprising, but after chapter upon chapter of gloomy introspection from Mary, this is just a breath of fresh air. I wasn’t much impressed with the final resolution of the romance, because it could have put the man in a very difficult position if he hadn’t felt the same way, but at least Mary showed some gumption.

This is a hard book for me to review because, although in many ways it’s well written, for most of it I just didn’t enjoy it. I kept going in the hope that it would finally get some momentum, and it did, right at the end, but it was really too late to save it. I didn’t notice many historical errors, although I cringed every time Mary went off walking the streets of London by herself, or entertaining one of the suitors alone. I think if the book had been reduced to a sensible length, or if its excess of pages had been filled with actual events rather than Mary’s inner thoughts and low self-esteem, I might at least have given it three stars. Frankly, the author is too good a writer to put out this turgid stuff, and she has a major publisher who should have done some serious editing on it, so no excuse. Two stars it is. But if you want the every-last-detail version of Mary’s life, or you really, really like endless introspection and analysis of books of the era, then this is definitely the book for you.

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Review: The Undaunted by Kate Archer (2022)

Posted October 28, 2024 by Mary Kingswood in Review / 0 Comments

The third part of this series, and the routine is well established now. An unlikely debutante is chosen to make her entrance to society under the aegis of one of six ladies who had no daughter of their own. Said debutante gets into a multitude of trouble, falls out with the hero (a relative of the sponsoring lady) who then rescues her from even worse trouble and a happy ending hoves into view.

In this episode, the young lady is Miss Caroline Upton, daughter of a baron more interested in his stud and horseracing, and she finds herself sponsored by Lady Easton because Lord Easton (and the Prince Regent, no less) incurred a gambling debt. There’s the usual business about getting the girl kitted out for society, and then they’re off to Brighton, since the main season is over. Here, Caroline is unwittingly drawn into the Prince Regent’s rackety set, in peril of her reputation, while Lady Easton and her cronies set about keeping her respectable.

As always with this author, the humour is well to the fore, with Lady Easton and her nephew both incredibly buttoned up and driven by routine, a butler who’s just as much a stickler and a lady’s maid who’s delightfully subversive, and the cause of Caroline getting into trouble on multiple occasions. The joy of this book is seeing the nephew, Lord Bertridge, gradually unravelling as he becomes reluctantly embroiled in Caroline’s affairs.

It’s all jolly good fun, and if there is a certain slackness in historical accuracy, who cares? It’s so much fun, I can’t give it less than five stars.

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